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This week we did a mini-project on the impacts that railways had in the industrial revolution in Britain. This is all leading up to our metaphor machine project that I will be blogging about in the coming weeks.
We were told to make an Explain Everything explaining and enforcing three causes and consequences that we believed were the most influential. The document below is my outline…
And then I made the Explanation Everything…
But between those two steps we did two peer revision sessions. In my first one Quinn suggested making my commentary more energetic and interesting, so that it was engaging and interesting. I did this throughout but especially in the middle section, the one where I had the least amount of enthusiasm.
In the second and most recent one Spencer didn’t have much to say, just mostly about pronunciation, which I went back and tweaked as well.
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