We have recently come to the end of our fantasy untit, and a big part of said unit was an in class essay about fantasy. We researched, were lectured on and learned about essay structure, technique and the genre of fantasy. Not just fantasy though, we read and watched Lewis Caroll’s Alice in Wonderland. For this essay we were presented with 2 prompts to choose from one more focused on the book and the second just more broadly around fantasy. I chose the fantasy one.

We were given a mere 30 minutes in class to write the essay. I wound up with this…

It was quite rushed, so we were given a time to revise with a peer revision. I was with Michael.

Using that criticism I revised and made a second and final draft.