CBC writing challenge

My teacher sent out an alert telling us that there is a writing contest coming up and that any of us who feel experimental, and want to try and write a 300-400 word story prompt set in 2168, should give it a shot. So considering the fact that I have literal buckets of homework, a job, and extra curricular activity’s, there was nothing holding me back, and I decided to give it a shot. 

This plant has tons of depth and focus. Comment down below on some of it!

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(This is my writing promt please leave some feedback down below if you have anything you want me to change! I would love to hear your feedback!)I feel very fondly of writing and really enjoy reading books and magazines, and so I decided to write this prompt on something I feel strongly about. The prompt was not quite long enough to achieve a proper storyline, but I wanted to write about depth and focus. I wanted to go into so much detail that the whole 400 words is about one moment. One second, and all that people can draw from it. I really enjoy toying around with the idea of what people can take from certain situations and how much people can make out of one moment, because our brains move very fast and sometimes were not quite ready to move on.

 I wanted to take a subtle approach to the futuristic theme, because I am not so keen of sci-fi and futuristic books, and I wanted what I was writing about to be something I enjoyed to write. So I sort of just dismantled that part of the challenge, aside form the fact that the person who’s perspective it is told from is time traveling back for the 28th time to that exact scene in time, they are seeing the girl under the oak tree for the last time. Every time!

I feel as though this prompt went well because I decided to pour myself into detail, and I really am happy with how it turned out. I recently read French Exit, by Patrick deWitt, and I wanted my prompt to reflect some of his influence. I  also used the information that I have been learning in school about hooks and bridges to compete the intro and to draw people into the story. 

The challenge was put on through CBC and I would totally recommend you check it out. The deadline to enter your pieces is the 29th, so get them in fast!