Halfway through my advertising project!

I am now halfway through my advertising project and am enjoying it so far. Here are some of the photos so you can see the improvement as I continue to make more drafts. The first image is my latest ad for earthquake preparedness It shows a destroyed house and tells people to be prepared. The second ad is my second draft for my tourist advertisement I chose a beach by my house that is always really quiet some of the critique I received asked where the beach was and for less exclamation marks. The third ad is my first business advertisement I chose Deep Cove Music because I take piano lessons there so I thought it was a good idea. I have not received criticism yet. The forth ad is my second earthquake advertising here I try to get people to get earthquake kits some feedback I got was telling me that I had to change the big map in the middle of the screen to something else. The fifth picture is my very first ad which was the ad for the tourist location. Some of the criticism I got was people saying it was more of a paragraph than an advertisement and that I should change to somewhere else. Then there is my first earthquake advertisment which I decided to change very quickly because it was not as clean as I wanted. Finally there is my current tourist advertisement where I stuck with the beach and made the location easier to find using the ad. This is where I am currently at for my advertising project and I will be posting more about it later.