So this past week in PLP we have been tasked to create a visual essay or explain everything on “Development of Railways in the Industrial Revolution”. This had to be represented in Cause and Consequence. We had to include an Intrduction, 3 Causes and Consequences, and a conclusion. At the start of this project explain everything was something I really wasn’t good at. You can see that pretty clearly in my first draft.

As you can see that work is not PLP standard. So we all get some feedback from each other and made second drafts. The main feedback I got was to add some more animations and make my voice sound more engaged.

In my second draft I added a bit more to the visual but didn’t have enough time to do anything with my voice. Here it is.

This 3rd and final draft is much better than the other two. Instead of having one slide for each topic I mostly had 3 or 4 slides. Also instead of just knowing what I was going to say I actually wrote a script this time. I put a lot more effort into this draft and I think it turned out well. Here is my final draft.