Hi guys welcome back to my blog it’s been a while but my teacher wanted me to put a blog up so we had to do thieeeees project for school and that’s what I’m going to be talking about today,

The impact on railways in the industrial revolution of Britain. Here’s my first draft of my project

Did you like it for start I am improving along the way but that’s good

Trying hard and pushing through when your making a draft

and that was my last draft it was good little changes but it worked out. Here’s my outline on how I did it but then aeration and everything but I extended it a lot.

 
Topic: The impact the railways had on the Industrial Revolution in Britain.
Introduction: The railways had many impacts on Britain during the Industrial Revolution.

Narration: hi welcome I will be telling you about train and why they helped

Visual: slow spinning trains and the amazing title

Topic 1: they were able to take solider to
Stop political unrest
Narration: they were able to send soilders to protests faster and mor offician

Visual: animation of soilders riding trains
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Topic 2: People were able take short trips to get to places faster

Narration: the trains made it so people could go on facation more often and have more fun
Visual: people laying with a train going by

Topic 3: First Impact
Made so you could actually set up SPORTING events

Narration: it made it really really easy to set up event because they can actually get there in time

Visual: sports with a train circling it fish eye bird eye view

Conclusion: In conclusion, the railway had a big impact on Britain during the Industrial Revolution.

Narration: that’s why had a big impact on the Industrial Revolution made it easier for everyone else

Visual: I like trains song

 

 

That hat was it just so u know some of that did not work like I wanted it to but I did what I did. Good bye.