Old SoLI:

“This year I plan to get better at focussing, participating, and asking for help”

Boring, vague, and unhelpful.

New and Improved SoLI:

“For the rest of this year, I plan to continue to search for effective strategies in managing my sensory issues to be able to focus better in class. I would also like to acknowledge that I have come very far in participating. Although I have space to improve in teamwork, collaboration, and in-class work. As far as asking for help goes, I believe I still have room to grow in this category. The way I plan to improve on this skill is by continuously going to tutorial, something my anxiety has stopped me from doing in the past. I have recently overcome this block and will be making continuous appearances in tutorial.”

Goes more in depth into each topic, a superior Statement of Learning Intent and if I do say so myself more interesting.