For this project we learned about Louis Riel and his part in protecting the Métis land. We had to write a multi paragraph response on how the portrayal of Louis Riel has changed over time. This one my first attempt at the paragraphs and the feedback i got from my teachers.
After receiving the feedback i went through my paragraphs and changed the parts i needed too. Ending up in my final paragraphs.
Louis Riel has have a very big impact on so many life’s and is truly a hero to the Métis people. People have there opinions on him but he did what he thought was the right thing to do.