The last few weeks have been FULL of revision. The reason that I say this is because we have been working on our now many times revised advertisements. In total we have been working on three advertisements (one for a business, one for a tourist hotspot and one for disaster advocacy.)  These ads have been reviewed by our peers and our teachers along with owners of businesses. I have gotten a mix of constructive criticism and positive feedback which is good in my opinion. This is good because it means I can improve but at the same time I am still doing good work.

Again, I say hooray for revision because where would we be now without revision? All automobiles go through rigorous revision, all building plans also go through revision, all people applying for jobs go through revision. Everything goes through revision. Obviously it’s a good thing otherwise we would have stopped revising thousands of years ago. To everyone who revises: keep up the good work.