I Have Fallen Down the Rabbit Hole of Trying to Come Up With Quippy Titles, and I am Beginning to Regret Not Using a Simpler Titling System

So, I mentioned a while ago that we’ve been learning about fantasy. Specifically, one of the things we’ve been learning about is Alice’s Adventures in Wonderland, which we read, watched a movie version of, and eventually had to write an essay on.

My essay focused on the topic of how Lewis Carroll created an imaginary world. There were a few things that I thought really made the world of Wonderland work: the fact that we, the readers, explored Wonderland at the same time as Alice; the mindset and logic of the characters to reflect the childishness of Alice (considering the entire thing was her dream); and how the logic of the settings and scenery had the ability to reflect this as well.

I went through a couple drafts of my essay, and got both peer and parent critique, but this was my final result:

A rabbit hole, a cup of tea, and a pack of playing cards, to most people, are not strange or wondrous items. However, when Lewis Carroll wrote the book Alice’s Adventures in Wonderland, he made all of these things extraordinary, as part of an imaginary world. Carroll draws us into that world by use of an exploratory perspective, a childish logic that draws on existing culture and language, and descriptions of various odd or fantastical settings and situations created from elements of reality.

When the book begins, the protagonist, Alice, is in an ordinary situation: bored and daydreaming by a riverbank. When a rabbit goes by wearing a waistcoat, she thinks that it is “not so very much out of the way” (Carroll, 5), but when the rabbit pulls a watch out of its pocket, she is confused and intrigued, and decides to follow it. She falls down a rabbit hole, which is much deeper than it should be, and full of strange items such as bookshelves. The world she finds herself in when she reaches the bottom of the rabbit hole is one as unfamiliar to her as it is to the reader, and as she explores, questions, and learns about this new world, so do we. Near the beginning of the book, Alice says “curiouser and curiouser”(Carroll, 11); she wonders at the strange things happening around her. Later on, however, she says that “everything’s curious today” (Carroll, 57), suggesting that she has accepted the strangeness of Wonderland, and she continues exploring it, taking the reader along with her. Being able to see Wonderland through the perspective of somebody discovering and exploring it for the first time helps to draw the reader in because they are learning just enough at a time that they keeping asking questions.

Besides the perspective the reader views the world from, Wonderland itself also helps draw the reader in. Carroll applies a childish logic to very everyday culture and language, often using puns and witticisms. Some of the best examples of this come from the tea party that Alice attends with the Mad Hatter, the March Hare, and the dormouse. The hatter personifies time, responding to Alice’s remark that she has to “beat time when (she learns) music” (Carroll, 53) by saying that “He won’t stand beating”. While the phrase “to beat time” does not, of course, refer to physically beating a person, there is a logic behind Carroll’s interpretation. In the same conversation, Alice asks for an explanation of how three children could draw treacle from a well, arguing that they were in the well at the time. The dormouse does not offer an explanation, but simply says, “Of course they were. Well in.” (Carroll, 56). While there is no real logic to what the dormouse is saying, it gives the reader an idea of how the character’s thoughts reflect the logic of the world around them. A similarly alogical logic is applied to how Wonderland looks.

The final way that Carroll draws readers into Wonderland is by using pieces of the real world to create fantasy settings and situations. At one point, Alice stumbles across some painters painting a rose bush, and Carroll says, “the roses growing were white, but there were three gardeners… busily painting it red.” While nothing about this is impossible (white roses aren’t imaginary, and could technically be painted red), the way the scene is composed draws upon this same childish logic of taking things at face value: white roses plus red paint equals red roses. In the first chapter, when Alice is falling down the rabbit hole, she notices that the walls are “filled with cupboards and bookshelves, (and) maps and pictures hung upon pegs” (Carroll, 6). While, once again, this could technically happen, it makes no sense. This blend of reality and fantasy elements not only helps to draw the reader in, but also makes the story stay with them longer, as things in real life may begin to remind them of the story.
In conclusion, the techniques Carroll exhibits of drawing someone into a fantasy world by giving them the feeling they’re exploring it, using a recognizable logic in an unusual way, and including elements of the real world in the fantasy one all help draw readers in to the world of Wonderland. These techniques are part of the reason that Alice’s Adventures in Wonderland, and Wonderland itself, have left such a legacy on the world, one that has lasted over a century and a half, and is still going strong.

While I think I could have gone more in depth with my analysis, and I actually would have liked to look at Through the Looking Glass, and What Alice Found There as well, seeing as it revisits the world, I think that overall, I was able to make the points I wanted to make with this essay. The world Carroll created with Wonderland is an interesting and well crafted portrayal of a child’s mind, and both Alice in Wonderland and Through Looking Glass are books that I enjoyed reading.

Toodles!

I Only Did This to Get a Reaction…

So, as I mentioned before we’ve been doing chemistry in science.

The other day, we did a science experiment that involved reacting copper dichloride with aluminum. This was what happened when they came into contact:

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While this was a cool reaction on its own, the rest of the experiment actually involved taking the pieces of metal from the original reaction, rinsing them out several times, and burning them. This made a green flame appear as well as the natural orange flame.

Toodles.

The Wonders of Fantasy

So, we’re currently doing a unit on fantasy. Specifically, we’ve recently been learning about the concept of wonder.

First of all, we brainstormed a list words related to wonder. That list of words eventually looked something like this:

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Questions
Children
Creation
Understandings
Contemplating
Innocence
Story
Change
Dream land
Telepathy
Wonderland
Dreams
Awe
Creativity
Psychology
Psycho
Strange
Extraordinary
Belief
Magic
Theory
Wish
Impressive
Simulation
Innocence
Naivety
Wonderful
Wonderbread
Alternate history
Confusion
Brain storm
What if
Idea
Thoughts
Brainstorm
Why
Mystery
Dreamers
Outcomes
Devotion
Passion
Curiosity

(We didn’t actually talk about all of those. For instance, ‘wonderbread’ didn’t inspire a discussion.)

To learn a bit more about wonder, we took a look at an article about it, and answered some questions about said article.

The first question asked about a part of the article where the writer described going to a circus as a child, and being in wonder while his parents were merely enduring the circus for the happiness of their child. Speicifically, the question asked about the difference between the writer(Prinz)’s experience and his parents’.

In answer, I said that while Prinz was completely captivated by the circus, his parents were likely bored. When explaining how his parents probably felt about the show, Prinz describes it as a “sort of garish pageantry”, suggesting the show was probably overdramatic to the point of being unenjoyable. As a child, however, Prinz was fascinated by the dramatic flourishes that would later make the show seem “garish”.

The second question simply asked for a list of the “three bodily symptoms Prinz postulates as components of wonder”. The three symptoms described were rolling eyes, a swelling heart, and suspended breath. While these symptoms for the most part make sense, I did find it strange that Prinz cited rolling eyes as a symptom of wonder, as I think of people rolling their eyes when they are being sarcastic or unsentimental.

The third question asked about Francis Bacon’s description of wonder. My answer was that he referred to it as “broken knowledge”. The use of the word broken suggests that wonder is an ailment or disadvantage that knowledge can fix. More specifically, he believed that wonder could be “fixed”, so to speak, by science.

The fourth and final question simply asked for a description of “one moment in your life when you have experienced wonder”. I wrote a paragraph about stargazing as a child.

A blanket patterned with stars is nothing in comparison to seeing the night sky when it is clear and calm and far from artificial light. It still comes in handy, though, to have a blanket to lie on instead of going straight from a warm quilt to the cold deck outside. The sky is a piece of art, strangely inspiring and endlessly beautiful to look at. The dim lights from the house are like another world, separate from the ideas that stars encompass and the lives that they have changed. The star-spangled blanket laid out on the deck is meant to be for warmth, or comfort, but instead it stands as a tribute, a piece of the night sky to hold onto, a reminder of the strange sense it gives of being more alive than usual, being in just the right place. Every once in a while, a light flashing across the sky turns out to be a shooting star and not just a satellite. There is no need to wish for anything.

Aside from the questions, we also had to write something based on a picture prompt. I don’t have the actual picture prompt, but here’s what I wrote:

There’s something strange about the light coming from above us. There’s no fire that we can see, not like the torches that line the walls, their dim flames casting shadows on the stone walls around us. But it must be something stronger than fire, for stepping into the light even for a second sets us aflame. Or at least, that’s what happened to her.

We thought nothing could kill us. We’ve existed here, someplace beneath the earth’s crust, for as long as I can remember, which is maybe centuries. Not one of us has ever been lost.

But she was drawn to the strange colours. To me, they look fake and too-bright, manufactured even. In stark contrast to the earthy greys, browns and reds that have surrounded us, which make me feel I’m somewhere I belong, the bright colours seem insane and unreachable, like something from a dream.

She disagreed. She was young, I suppose, and still remembered something from before. Or maybe she was insane. I don’t know. She spoke of strange things, of sunlight and flowers and something she called happiness. She said if she could just get out, everything would be beautiful and she would feel alive. She seemed to want nothing more than to reach whatever was above us; colours and light and happiness. I almost wonder if there really is something up there that could be better than what we’ve had here for centuries.

Then and again, flies land on spiderwebs.

Her smile was strange, too, just the one smile, her last one. Instead of the mocking, sardonic smile she usually sported, her smile was… I don’t know. Strange, like I said.

Then she stepped into the shaft of light and caught fire.

And on that bright note,

Toodles!

Butterbeer Pong, Better Movies, and Black Cloaks: The Joys of Being a Harry Potter Nerd

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By this point, you’ve probably figured out the subject of this post, but in case you haven’t: it’s Harry Potter.

More specifically, my class recently did projects revolving around the Harry Potter franchise. In similar fashion to the Star Wars blue sky project, and the blue sky project at the end of last year, this project involved coming up with an inquiry question and building a project based on answering it, and culminated in an open-house style exhibition for our families, teachers and peers to see our projects.

I went through several inquiry questions, most of which got rejected or just didn’t have as much potential for a project as I first thought. Some of the ones I didn’t end up doing included “What is the etymology of some of the spells and potions? What might this say about their history?”, “Is there a better way to sort the students than with the existing houses? What might a better method be?” and “Can I just bake and decorate the world’s best Harry Potter themed cupcakes and have each one represent a different character and explain why?” (A question which I definitely did not think of at three AM while fretting over how to make a project suitable to the exhibitor style, and which definitely would have gotten approved had I actually pitched it. Definitely.)

Oh, and also “What exactly is the function of a rubber duck?”.

However, the question I eventually ended up with was “What would the impact of including the St. Mungo’s scene from the fifth Harry Potter book in the movie be?”.

The St. Mungo’s scene, if you don’t already know, is a scene, or rather a few scenes which I merged into one, that takes place in Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix, in which Arthur Weasley is in the wizard hospital after getting attacked by Voldemort’s snake, a predicament he was only saved from because Harry witnessed the attack in a dream. While at St. Mungo’s, Harry, Ron, Hermione and Ginny stumble across Gilderoy Lockhart (a wizard who was famous for a number of feats he didn’t actually do. Rather, he erased the memories of the people who did impressive things and took the credit. However, he ended up erasing his own memory in book two, while attempting to erase the memories of Ron and Harry, who had discovered that he was a fake.), as well as Neville Longbottom (a classmate of theirs. He was at the hospital to visit his parents, who had been tortured into insanity by one of Voldemort’s followers. Only Harry knew about this, although he found out from Dumbledore’s, and not Neville.). This scene isn’t included in the movie adaptation.

For my project, I decided to storyboard what a movie version of the scene might look like, making some likely edits as I went (such as compressing a few scenes into one, and cutting Ginny from the scene, as the movies didn’t focus on her as much.). For each panel of the storyboard, I wrote a short blurb explaining its probable impact on the movie, and the series as a whole. I displayed my full storyboard, in the form of a poster, at the exhibition.

Speaking of the exhibition, I worked in a group of students with similarly themed projects to mine to turn a section of the library into Dumbledore’s office. This included covering some bookshelves with black paper and fairy lights, setting up iPads with paper “picture frames” so they looked like moving portraits, placing bowls of candy out for the exhibition attendees to eat, and also setting up “butterbeer pong”. The basic concept of butterbeer pong is throwing ping-pong balls through “quidditch hoops” (made of badminton rackets) into a triangle of red solo cups.

All in all, I thought the exhibition went well. I meandered away from my own project long enough to look at other people’s projects (which were generally excellent), check out the grade eight exhibition (which was good but had a much less exciting topic than ours) and the grade eleven exhibiton (which was pretty amazing, especially considering that they had less time than us). However, I do think my project would have been better suited to a different style of presentation, as it wasn’t as visually interesting or attention-catching as it could have been.

Toodles.

My Chemical Superhero

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So, in science we’ve been working on developing chemical superheroes.

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…Not that kind of chemical superhero. (I’m so sorry. I felt the need to make a reference.)

What we’re making is more superheroes each based on a specific element. As usual, this is happening in small groups over a period of several weeks.

We’re still partway through this project, but so far my group has chosen an element, chosen a group name, designed a badge, and made a periodic table.

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My group is named Fuelled by Ramen, after the record label of the same name. Our superhero’s powers come from the element bromine, and include flying and burning people’s skin. However, bromine can be contained by lead, so our superhero will probably have a lead suit.

There will most likely be a part two of this post so watch out for the continued adventures of… bromine bro… or something. *insert awesome superhero name here*?

Toodles.

Metaphor Machines Part Two

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So, you remember me talking about the metaphor machines? I think I was about halfway through the project?

We’ve now come to the end of that project, and as such it’s time for another blog post.

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First off, let me give you a summary of what my previous blog post was about (it’s also linked above):

A metaphor machine is a machine that symbolizes a revolution. Every part of the machine is a metaphor for some event in the revolution. Our machine symbolized the French Revolution. It also looked Steampunk, and we made a video about it.

And that video basically sums everything up, so here it is:

Toodles.

Let’s Get Down to Business

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So, today is Take Your Kid to Work Day, when all the grade nines go to work with their parents. Or in my case, with my mum and sister, Cleo, as they work at the same place, an environmental consulting company called Envirochem Services.

Envirochem is a company that other companies hire to make sure they’re not doing anything ridiculously harmful to the environment. They also do environmental investigations. However, the work that Cleo and my mum do mostly just seems to be bookkeeping.

While I was at Envirochem, my mum explained what invoices are, and Cleo explained how to file them. I also wrote some cheques, went to the post office to drop off a package (with Cleo), and met some of the most important members of the company…

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(The dog’s name is Pip, and he belongs to a guy that works there. The platypus, as you may know, is named Perry, and he belongs to a different guy that works there.)

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Getting back to the point, I’m not sure I would want to work at a company similar to Envirochem. While I was there I talked to some of the (alive, human) members of the company, and most of them asked me right off the bat whether I liked math and science. (Most of the people there are engineers or environmental scientists.)

And the thing is, while math and science are important, and I don’t mind doing them, they aren’t what I’m primarily interested in. I like fine arts– writing, drawing, music. If I could have any job I wanted I would want something arts-related because that’s what I enjoy and care about. However, I still don’t know what I want to do with my life. Maybe I will end up doing something similar to what my mum and sister do.

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Toodles.

Metaphor Machines

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So, I’m not sure if I’ve already mentioned this, but we’re currently in the middle of a project.

You might remember we were learning about revolutions a little while back? Specifically, the process of a revolution, with some focus on Crane Brinton’s theory.

More recently, we learned about steampunk .

Basically, we’ve been building “metaphor machines”, or machines which also serve as metaphors. In this case, we’re divided into small groups, and each group is building a machine to represent a revolution. Each part of the machine has to be a metaphor for an important event of the revolution. The machine also has to have a steampunk aesthetic.

My group is building a machine to represent the French Revolution. Because we’re still in the process of building it I don’t have a lot of photos, but right now it looks something like this:

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The idea is for a ball to roll down the halfpipes, triggering reactions along the way such as pushing two gears together so they interlock (representing the Tennis Court Oath, an oath taken to say together), a string of lights going out (representing the September Massacres), and a pulley bringing the ball to the top of the machine (representing Napolean’s rise to power and a return to a similar government as at the start of the revolution).

The process of us making the machine, as well as some documentation of it working, and an explanation of the metaphors and the events of the French Revolution, will eventually be made into a video. We’ve been plotting the video by use of a storyboard, and taking some time lapses and pictures to potentially include in it. When it’s the done, the video will actually end up here, on this blog, so look forward to a part two of this post.

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Until then, however, I think I’ll wrap this up.

Toodles!

I Have a Dream House

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So, this blog post is going to be a little different.

This blog post is about math.

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Specifically, about a math project I just did creating a blueprint for my “dream house”. This was actually a group project, so it wasn’t really my dream house (especially considering it doesn’t include enough bedrooms, so I just get a closet), but it was really fun to design.

Before we got to design the actual dream house, we did some work involving figuring out the square footage of some houses from existing blueprints, and pricing houses in different areas. We also were given a list of rules to follow about designing a kitchen, which are as follows:

1. Any entry door should not interfere with the safe use of appliances
2. Appliance doors should not interfere with each other
3. The range, sink, and refrigerator form a “Work Station Triangle”. The sum of the distances between these stations should not exceed 26ft. There must be at least four feet between each work center.
4. The width of the walkway must be at least three feet.
5. There must be 18in counter space on each side of the sink.
6. There must be at least one counter space that is three feet long.
7.There must be at least on counter space next to the oven.
8.The dishwasher must be within three feet of the sink.
9. The refrigerator, range and sink should not be immediately next to one another.
10. There must be a minimum length of thirteen feet of counter space.

I’m not actually sure that we followed all of these rules, as we made a small mistake and ended up with our house only being around 756 square feet, and had to quickly make it bigger. It ended up being 2,068.09 feet, and about $123,000 in the fictional neighbourhood we priced it in, which is still pretty cheap.

Before I explain any more about the design, here is a blueprint of the dream house and a list of rooms with square footage:

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So, to run you through the rooms:

– the music room kind of turned into a guest/entertainment room with a pool table, fooseball table, tv, and snazzy rug in addition to the singular musical instrument (a piano).
– the dining room is very minimalistic and includes only a table and a rack of wine bottles.
– the kitchen might not follow the rules, I’m not even sure at this point.
– the garage doesn’t have much space, as it has to hold Ruby’s bus, a car, my convertible and motorcycle, and a bike, which was unclaimed but could be Lucas’s/ .
– the bathroom is an ensuite off the bedroom, and doesn’t include anything we deemed unnessecary. For instance, a mirror.
– the bedroom has a lot of bookcases, and is one of the only rooms with a lamp. This is important, as there are no windows.
– the laundry room really isn’t exciting.
– the hall almost has enough house plants.
– the study is kind of small, but the cozy chair and wood burning fireplace make it probably one of the best rooms in the house.
– the playroom is basically a games room, with a laptop, phone, hammock, tv, and a rug that reminds me of Agar.io.

My main lament about this project was honestly just that we couldn’t design the house in more detail, such as adding colour, different floors, or better decor. While it was a fun and interesting project, I don’t think I would actually want to live in the house we designed.

Toodles!

Let Me Explain My Train of Thought

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So, it’s time for an Explain Everything. See, I just did a visual essay on the impacts of railroads in Britain during the Industrial Revolution. Specifically, three of them: easier, faster travel, easier distribution of agriculture, and the breaking down of social barriers.

Now, my first draft of this was very much in need of improvement. Here it is so you can watch it:

The peer critique I got for this draft included making the audio louder, fixing the accidental repeat of the animation while I didn’t say anything at one point, fixing the static sound while I moved things, not using burgers for the food (as they weren’t around in the Industrial Revolution), adding more colour, using more images, and maybe adding music.

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So, for my second draft, did I make a solid attempt to fix all of these things?

No. I just rerecorded some of the audio so it was louder, removed the silent animation, and attempting to move things more quietly.

Here’s the second draft:

The feedback I got for that draft included, once again, adding more colour and photos, not using burgers, and making the audio louder. This time it also included not having a white blob around the people, using a map of Britain instead of the world, and having more interesting backgrounds.

To start out, I found better (and more colourful) backgrounds, including a map of Britain instead of the world. Then I attempted to remove any white blobbery from the people. While I managed to cut down the white area pretty significantly, there was still some, and some of the people’s limbs ended up getting cut down quite a bit. However, I decided to move on, and found a picture of an apple as an alternative to the hamburger.

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Here is the final draft of my Explain Everything:

While I still could have made some additions, like music, that would have improved it, I think it’s definitely a major improvement over my first draft.

Toodles.

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